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Poetry
and Descriptive Writing Guidelines from Professional Writers
1. Cliché
Eliminate clichés, which are the vermin of imaginative writing. Initially fresh
images, clichés have been taken over and made mundane by too frequent usage.
They have lost their original authority, power, and beauty. They raise their
predictable heads (aaah, a cliché!) in the early drafts of even the most
experienced writers. Turning a cliché against itself by intentionally using it
in an inverted form can revive it. Puns can give a cliché a renewed life.
However, if a poem is merely going to repeat a cliché, cut it.
2. Abstract
Identify all abstract or general nouns and replace them with concrete or
specific ones. Words like "love," "freedom,"
"pain," "sadness," "anger," and other emotions and
ideas need to be channeled through the physical imagery of the five senses:
Sight, Sound, Smell, Touch, Taste (SSSTT). Creating original metaphors is the
most difficult part of poetry writing, not just for beginners, but for those who
have been working with words for years. This, however, is what makes a poem
distinctive and interesting.
3. Verbs
Fortify the physical character of the poem by using strong action verbs instead
of linking verbs in the passive voice. Because active verbs and concrete nouns
are more visceral, dynamic, and persuasive, they reduce the need for modifiers.
Avoid overusing the "-ing" form of verbs because it dilutes and
reduces their strength. It is like driving a speedboat without raising the
anchor.
4. Compress
Cut, compress, and condense! Imagine that you must pay your reader a dollar a
word to read your prose. Naturally, you will want to use few words to say as
much as possible. Then, imagine that you must pay your reader five dollars a
word to read your poetry. Compress, especially when the progress of the poem is
impeded by imprecise or indecisive language. Try the following experiment. Put a
gob of frozen orange juice on your tongue. This pure, concentrated slush,
without any liquid to dilute its sweet potency, is so pungent it stings. Make
your poem like that. Cut everything that can be cut until what's left penetrates
the flesh with its sweet, burning flavor.
5. Risk
Be daring in your writing. Experiment and take chances. Risk-taking adds
originality and spontaneity to the poem, which leads to imaginative and
linguistic breakthroughs. Read a wide variety of contemporary poets so that you
will begin to understand the breadth of poetry's language and modern
imagination. You will also become more conscious of its many voices. You cannot
mature as a poet unless you read widely. If you refuse to read, you refuse to
grow.
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